DESCRIPTION

An editor thinks I need more description in my manuscript. Of people and of the environment.

I had some Peter Mayle books on hand so I'm trying to look at them and see how he incorporates the south of France and his main characters' descriptions in them. Unfortunately, I get sidetracked by the story. Even when I've previously read the book, I can't be analytical.

Guess it's my mind. Maybe because it's going?

New Manuscript

Well, after working like crazy the past month, I've finally got my new work in shape to be handed off to beta readers.

I've already changed the locale and the era. Now I'm waiting to see what else I have to fix.

Sigh.